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Post  You People Annoy Me on Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:06 pm

Your stuff was better. I just came up with that out of nowhere.
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In fact

Post  Satyrcynic on Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:08 pm

You were both excellent. But ypam surprised me because I didn't know he could wax poetic...at all.

Very very cool!
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Post  You People Annoy Me on Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:13 pm

Neither did I for that matter.
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Well then

Post  Satyrcynic on Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:34 pm

I for one am thoroughly impressed by the talent here. Idea

whos turn is it?
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Not Me!

Post  You People Annoy Me on Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:36 pm

I just went. It's your turn isn't it?
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No

Post  Satyrcynic on Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:41 pm

It's not.
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Does this count?

Post  hermionejane0912 on Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:03 pm

She kissed his cheek, feeling the spark and warmth of what felt like a thousand years.


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Guess my writing is no good here

Post  hermionejane0912 on Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:18 pm

cuz my poetry sucks blood
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Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)

Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:31 pm

i was my turn but i havent been on till now and chris im very surprised i didnt know you could write like that...
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We're all impressed with Chris

Post  Satyrcynic on Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:53 pm

Your turn! Very Happy
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Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:58 pm

No!
nothing on the top of my head today.....
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Guess that makes it my turn

Post  Satyrcynic on Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:04 pm

Off the top of my head.

He was a poor buy who lived on a farm
she found her freedom with him arm in arm
he found another and she found a cross
speak to the serpent now eden is lost
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Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:10 pm

uhh.....

i cant think of a good starting line
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This gives me an idea!

Post  Satyrcynic on Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:12 pm

Anyone up for circle poetry?
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Hmmm...

Post  You People Annoy Me on Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:51 pm

Always fun.
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ima randomly write

Post  hermionejane0912 on Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:51 pm

Audrey Hepburn wanna-be
pertty eyes blind, she cant see
the way they laugh when she walks away
the dirty, mean things they say.
Called a whore every day of her life,
Pretty little virgin, but she just might
be the one you've been looking for.
The one to laugh, to slam the car door.

SOMEONE CONTUINUE
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Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:01 pm

i dont want to i like that the way it is
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top of my head!

Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:47 pm

im leaving today
saying goodbye cant be that hard
i say goodbye to the life i made here
i say goodbye to the friends ive made through it all
i say goodbye to my family who mean the world to me
and i say goodbye to my boyfriend
he's the reason im laying here
in this mental instute
slitting my wrist,trying suicide, and speaking of only death were my symptoms.
im laying here on this hospital bed because i changed for you.
i wanted to be with you so bad, i changed everything for you.
i left my friends and family for you.
And im dying today for you.


this is actually one im really proud of.... Very Happy
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more of the top of my head!!

Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:04 pm

i dont understand how this fighting all began.
we were fine twenty minutes ago.
but apperently i wasnt good enough for you.
so im packing my bags and moving tonite.
you have fun with your new girlfriend.
i guess ill never be enough for anyone.
did you know its a six story drop from where i live.
i bet it would be awfully fun to jump.
i wouldnt be missed.
would i?
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As usual

Post  Satyrcynic on Thu Jul 30, 2009 9:54 pm

These are both... darktastic! I personally adore them, although some peple might be frightened.

I think you should publish an emo poetry book lol.

Very nice work.
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Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)

Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:02 pm

whyy thank you and ill get right on that..lol Rolling Eyes
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Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:44 pm

i ran outta brain power Sad
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Post  Satyrcynic on Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:44 pm

I havent had any today at all
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Post  Gothic_Princess_Brittany on Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:45 pm

we could always write together jeremy...
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Post  Satyrcynic on Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:46 pm

Im pretty bad with poems to begin with so I'm not sure how I'll do at co-writing one, but we could try, if you wanna go first.
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