Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:26 pm

what do you mean??

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:28 pm

I mean poetry is your therapy. As is normal for people with artistic pursuits.

Got any more?

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:30 pm

uhmm maybe lemme see what i can think up Like a Star @ heaven

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:32 pm

smiles and laughs
the good times we had
till you turned 21
you partied
you got drunk
you did drugs
and in the midst of those things you beat me.
and im telling you this as a whisper in the wind for in the midst of beating me you killed me.

thatss not very good....but thats off the top of my head....so it shouldnt be nothing from the top of my head is ever good

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:34 pm

I have to say things from the top of your head are often very good, including this which is nowhere near sub par if not absolutely outstanding. Cool

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:38 pm

Watching cars jumping bars
you're going here and there
I'm watching you you're watching her
I'm hearing something tear
My heart is racing but you dont care, you're more interested in her and her punky hair
I walk away unoticed and you come home at two
My pags are packed when you walk in but I'm not sure it's you
You're looking for pajamas I trample you to the floor
I stare at you you're touching me I call you a whore
You punch me in the stomach i spit in your face
I wake up at one thirty hoping all is erased
But youre not in bed beside me your way outta place
I pack my bags prepared to leave when I hear a great surprise
I walk into the bathroom and see two sets of eyes
I'm in such a state of shock i can barely catch my breath
Your hands are on her hair while she's laying on her breasts
Looking at her looking into my bloodshot eyes
I whisper "Maryanne" my sister and inside me something dies
I say I thought you'd stay true to me and go in for an attack
But I hear a loud crack and everything goes black
Now screaming and shouting are all I can hear
But the three little words I've been dying to hear
Will never again be whispered in my ear

this look familiar??

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:38 pm

I dont remember it offhand... Very Happy

hermionejane0912 Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:39 pm

anyone got any?

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:40 pm

Whats the difference between motivation and ice cream? drunken

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:44 pm

umm you can eat one and not the other..? lol i have a dirty mind

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:45 pm

This makes me want to start a dirty mind thread.

Well sorry, hermoine, I have ice cream, not motivation.

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:47 pm

lol....no dirty mind threads please!!

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:47 pm

too late?

hermionejane0912 Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:53 pm

THE GAME OF WIN! Razz

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:54 pm

you would lose that game Shocked

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:59 pm

sitting on the porch
awaiting your call
you were supposed to be here hours ago
i think you stood me up.
but in all reality youve always been there for me.
another hour passes when the news hits my house.
you got into a car accident on your way to get me..
its all my fault i think..
i killed my own boyfriend
these are the only thoughts running through my head.
and the truth is id do anything to be with you.
so i take rope from the garage and use the basement stairs.
im on my way to heaven to be with you dear.

another one off the top of my head.

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:00 pm

I like the top of your head!

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:00 pm

why thank you! Rolling Eyes

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:01 pm

lol

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:05 pm

a razor.
a diary.
and music.
these things surround me in a dark room full of blood and hatred!

i heart this

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:06 pm

Thats my kind of poem.
Twisted Evil

Now I need to write something rediculously dramatic and goth.

Gothic_Princess_Brittany Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:07 pm

your scary silent

**Satyrcynic** Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:12 pm

Waking up to hear
words I thought they'd never say
things that cannot be real
things that took your life away
how can I go on alone
hearing these words replay;
"I promise you wherever you go I'll be right behind you
I'll follow you wherever you lead and stand there beside you
and no matter what changes I swear this will be true
wherever you go I'll be there for you"
A promise felt sincere and deep
my destiny alone to keep
a promised seal by drops of blood
on a sharpened blade of steel
showing me it's real
closing out my heart and mind
and following somewhere
to find your love

**You People Annoy Me** Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:17 pm

The boy lookin' out of his window
Feeling surges of great regret
thinkin' 'bout all he knows
thinkin' 'bout what he had let
Happen to him
Happen to them
He's hanging on the rim
Watching as they condemn
What he did
What he said
He woners amid
Things that still should be ahead
And he cries out
As his world burns down...

hermionejane0912 Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:59 pm

you make me feel like i cant write!

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POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)