POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)
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What?
Your stuff was better. I just came up with that out of nowhere.
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In fact
You were both excellent. But ypam surprised me because I didn't know he could wax poetic...at all.
Very very cool!
Very very cool!
Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)
Neither did I for that matter.
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Not Me!
I just went. It's your turn isn't it?
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Does this count?
She kissed his cheek, feeling the spark and warmth of what felt like a thousand years.
Last edited by Satyrcynic on Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:05 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : No this does not count)
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Guess my writing is no good here
cuz my poetry sucks blood
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Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)
i was my turn but i havent been on till now and chris im very surprised i didnt know you could write like that...
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Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)
No!
nothing on the top of my head today.....
nothing on the top of my head today.....
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Guess that makes it my turn
Off the top of my head.
He was a poor buy who lived on a farm
she found her freedom with him arm in arm
he found another and she found a cross
speak to the serpent now eden is lost
He was a poor buy who lived on a farm
she found her freedom with him arm in arm
he found another and she found a cross
speak to the serpent now eden is lost
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uhh.....
i cant think of a good starting line
i cant think of a good starting line
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Hmmm...
Always fun.
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ima randomly write
Audrey Hepburn wanna-be
pertty eyes blind, she cant see
the way they laugh when she walks away
the dirty, mean things they say.
Called a whore every day of her life,
Pretty little virgin, but she just might
be the one you've been looking for.
The one to laugh, to slam the car door.
SOMEONE CONTUINUE
pertty eyes blind, she cant see
the way they laugh when she walks away
the dirty, mean things they say.
Called a whore every day of her life,
Pretty little virgin, but she just might
be the one you've been looking for.
The one to laugh, to slam the car door.
SOMEONE CONTUINUE
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Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)
i dont want to i like that the way it is
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top of my head!
im leaving today
saying goodbye cant be that hard
i say goodbye to the life i made here
i say goodbye to the friends ive made through it all
i say goodbye to my family who mean the world to me
and i say goodbye to my boyfriend
he's the reason im laying here
in this mental instute
slitting my wrist,trying suicide, and speaking of only death were my symptoms.
im laying here on this hospital bed because i changed for you.
i wanted to be with you so bad, i changed everything for you.
i left my friends and family for you.
And im dying today for you.
this is actually one im really proud of....
saying goodbye cant be that hard
i say goodbye to the life i made here
i say goodbye to the friends ive made through it all
i say goodbye to my family who mean the world to me
and i say goodbye to my boyfriend
he's the reason im laying here
in this mental instute
slitting my wrist,trying suicide, and speaking of only death were my symptoms.
im laying here on this hospital bed because i changed for you.
i wanted to be with you so bad, i changed everything for you.
i left my friends and family for you.
And im dying today for you.
this is actually one im really proud of....
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more of the top of my head!!
i dont understand how this fighting all began.
we were fine twenty minutes ago.
but apperently i wasnt good enough for you.
so im packing my bags and moving tonite.
you have fun with your new girlfriend.
i guess ill never be enough for anyone.
did you know its a six story drop from where i live.
i bet it would be awfully fun to jump.
i wouldnt be missed.
would i?
we were fine twenty minutes ago.
but apperently i wasnt good enough for you.
so im packing my bags and moving tonite.
you have fun with your new girlfriend.
i guess ill never be enough for anyone.
did you know its a six story drop from where i live.
i bet it would be awfully fun to jump.
i wouldnt be missed.
would i?
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As usual
These are both... darktastic! I personally adore them, although some peple might be frightened.
I think you should publish an emo poetry book lol.
Very nice work.
I think you should publish an emo poetry book lol.
Very nice work.
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Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)
I havent had any today at all
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Re: POETRY -- original title; Randomness and a First Timer (for a forum, you dirty birdies)
Im pretty bad with poems to begin with so I'm not sure how I'll do at co-writing one, but we could try, if you wanna go first.
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